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Touchy by cocoaferret Touchy by cocoaferret
But it's just that people are so sensitive and so touchy, and you're just going to upset somebody without ever realizing it.
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AKA 'Ultragood III' (Man, talk about 'ye olde deviations')

Another part of my project for art class! This one shows 'line'~
I sketched it out in pencil and then inked it with... Well, a regular ol' ink pen! (I'm pretty primitive in that department)

And here you can finally see the truth behind the fact that I have unsteady hands. It's a miracle I can do otherwise with my comic stuff ^^;

But anyways, this actually has a way more concrete idea and emotion behind it:

Anger and hair.

the two things that make up school-me.

FWOOOOOOSH!

... I'd love to have a critique if you have the time! :>
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:iconjamie2286:
Ink and lines are absolutely difficult do. You have such a steady hand, and it makes me so jealous! I will say that you ink think rather lovely, the lines are so crisp! And this had to take forever, and the brilliance behind the anger and hair--as most girls get fed up with their hair--it is a good relation between the two. I wish that I was a good with ink. You just need to keep up the good work and don't let anyone tell you that you can't draw. You are one of the best artist here, and you can definitely draw whatever you please.
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I love this piece. I've said this before, but your style so reminds me of Silverstein. I mean, it's HAIR, how much can hair say? But the raw anger in this and the sheer mass of voluptuous, twisting, bountiful bonnet of hair represents more. It has humor and depth. There's nothing slap-stick about it.

I'm also familiar with line art, and I've never seen it used like this before. Not all the lines are straight and steady, but that's okay. After all, real hair isn't perfect. Heck, for most girls, hair is the cause of a lot of stress. Which is clearly represented here, so bravo.

Overall, I adore this piece. Simple at first, but a closer look reveals a lot of diligent work. It reminds me of sharp, sadistic humor. My favorite kind.
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PKMNrr649 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, that hair is amazing <3
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PandoraLewis Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I love the hair!
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Reemon-27 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011
And i still wondering, How isn't this a DD!? :\
:heart:
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Reemon-27 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011
And i'm still wondering, How isn't this a DD!? :\
:heart:*


what a fail....
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FinFishuu Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2011
wow *-*
its amazing D:
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VampireFTW Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I feel like you started drawing something like this in Engrish class. *totally not stalking*

Whatchu so angry at, woman? D<
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AQuAsHiNe Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so amazing, well done!
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Epileptic-Trees Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011
CRAP MAN.
I can't take how good your stuff is.
I scroll down, and then up, and then down and just take it in, and just AUGHGHGHGH.
COMPOSITION, and DETAIL and GRAWWWWWWW.

I won't critque you because I'd just be kissing your ass and that's not exactly helpful.
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LovelyPoison Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
O.O Lots of hair...

Splendid job! ♥
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LayneMuffins Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011
Love it! I especially like how LONG her hair is! (Your hair?)
Anyshways, it's really nice, and you did a fantastic job!
(Though, I'm left wondering.... what does it look like when the hair is NOT defy-ing gravity?)
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LayneMuffins Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011
Oh, and I wanted to ask you,
DOES YOUR HAIR GLOW AND HEAL WOUNDS WHEN YOU SING SONGS ABOUT FLOWERS THAT GLEAM AND GLOW?


...sorry for the Tangled-related question... I had to...
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SiriuslyFanatic Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you love drawing hair huh man o3o
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AoiSora19S Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconattentionduelistsplz: my hair is assaulting you!
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blu-hell-smith Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011
HAAAAAAAIIIIIIRRRRRRRRR! So much HAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
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Mirminay Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
CUT YOUR HAIR ALREADY
GODDAMNIT WOMAN HOW IS THIS EVEN BRUSHABLE.



Oh but it has such a nice angry touch. o3o
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applePAI Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Student Filmographer
ohmy XDD

It's really verr nice though, it's so clean~ *_* even if you say you have shaky hands... I don't believe you, this is just way too nice XD (I have shaky hands too, and my stuff isn't anywhere near as nice as this /D)
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yzkethrag Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
"MY HAIR GIVES ME SUPER-STRENGHT!"

Man, look at that hair. D_D
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BittersweetLily Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wow.
Can you imagine the bottles of conditioner they have to go through daily? haha
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R-ah Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Nnnngh. *_* I love the lines in the hair! I love your lines in general!
My "critique" is just that her face shape looks weird for looking/being angled up? But it's not like, OH MY GOD WHAT IS THIS. Sob I hate critiquing stuff because I'm in no position to har har.
I think you should consider doing threadless t-shirts or something? 8D
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aikiro Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011   Digital Artist
Very nicely done!

I like the the smoothness and the line weight (you're always so creative with line weight) although personally, I would look out for the hair dipping too far below the shoulders. It looks a little odd.

But that could just be me. Either way I love it.
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Scribble-Mouse Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011
That is some intense hair!
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Megalemon Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist
You kiddin me? Those lines are sharp!

Me, I look like I have Parkinson's trying to draw a straight line... ahah
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LackadaisicalLeopah Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So much hair. That was me before I cut it. XD
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cloudcrash Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011
Just did my first two critiques on your work. Rather enjoyed it!

Hope you don't think I'm too obsessed with your art.

EVEN THOUGH I AM
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LizardAndBlankets Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Student Digital Artist
That's a lot of hair and anger! :U
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Courtney-Sama Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist
HOLY HAIR.
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KasumiAlche Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011
Kind of reminds me of a manga called Spiral XD A horror manga, and one of the things that happens is that these girls hair go crazy XD

But yeah, you did well in depicting emotion with the hair. Nicely done :3
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MaureenRide101 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011
I love it :3
Great job!!
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