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September 28, 2011
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Touchy by cocoaferret Touchy by cocoaferret
But it's just that people are so sensitive and so touchy, and you're just going to upset somebody without ever realizing it.

AKA 'Ultragood III' (Man, talk about 'ye olde deviations')

Another part of my project for art class! This one shows 'line'~
I sketched it out in pencil and then inked it with... Well, a regular ol' ink pen! (I'm pretty primitive in that department)

And here you can finally see the truth behind the fact that I have unsteady hands. It's a miracle I can do otherwise with my comic stuff ^^;

But anyways, this actually has a way more concrete idea and emotion behind it:

Anger and hair.

the two things that make up school-me.


... I'd love to have a critique if you have the time! :>
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Ink and lines are absolutely difficult do. You have such a steady hand, and it makes me so jealous! I will say that you ink think rather lovely, the lines are so crisp! And this had to take forever, and the brilliance behind the anger and hair--as most girls get fed up with their hair--it is a good relation between the two. I wish that I was a good with ink. You just need to keep up the good work and don't let anyone tell you that you can't draw. You are one of the best artist here, and you can definitely draw whatever you please.
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I love this piece. I've said this before, but your style so reminds me of Silverstein. I mean, it's HAIR, how much can hair say? But the raw anger in this and the sheer mass of voluptuous, twisting, bountiful bonnet of hair represents more. It has humor and depth. There's nothing slap-stick about it.

I'm also familiar with line art, and I've never seen it used like this before. Not all the lines are straight and steady, but that's okay. After all, real hair isn't perfect. Heck, for most girls, hair is the cause of a lot of stress. Which is clearly represented here, so bravo.

Overall, I adore this piece. Simple at first, but a closer look reveals a lot of diligent work. It reminds me of sharp, sadistic humor. My favorite kind.
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PKMNrr649 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, that hair is amazing <3
PandoraLewis Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I love the hair!
Reemon-27 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011
And i still wondering, How isn't this a DD!? :\
Reemon-27 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011
And i'm still wondering, How isn't this a DD!? :\

what a fail....
FinFishuu Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2011
wow *-*
its amazing D:
VampireFTW Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I feel like you started drawing something like this in Engrish class. *totally not stalking*

Whatchu so angry at, woman? D<
AQuAsHiNe Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so amazing, well done!
Epileptic-Trees Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011
I can't take how good your stuff is.
I scroll down, and then up, and then down and just take it in, and just AUGHGHGHGH.

I won't critque you because I'd just be kissing your ass and that's not exactly helpful.
LovelyPoison Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
O.O Lots of hair...

Splendid job! ♥
LayneMuffins Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011
Love it! I especially like how LONG her hair is! (Your hair?)
Anyshways, it's really nice, and you did a fantastic job!
(Though, I'm left wondering.... what does it look like when the hair is NOT defy-ing gravity?)
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