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A Rhyming Run: Introduction by cocoaferret A Rhyming Run: Introduction by cocoaferret
Jeez.

Writing this stuff’s like eating limes.
And despite what you say, I’m updating in rhymes!

(But don’t worry, I’ll reply like a normal person
…Unless this habit decides to worsen)

And is that font too hard to read?
If not, I think I'll just proceed:

So This is just the introduction!
Part 1 is still quite under construction ^^;

But have no fear!
The future is clear!
I do believe its time is near!
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YaVaho155 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I prefer Poe :p
No seriously, never EVER compare poetry to teens again will ya? :p
It might offend people who actually spend time doing it ;)
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cocoaferret Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Student General Artist
Oh my, there's no comparing here! I'm saying Poetry ISN'T dreary things me and some of my fellow teens shoddily put together! It's an art form that takes time and effort, and there are many different kinds that need to be appreciated!

I'm just saying I shouldn't be taken seriously; I am NOT a real poet, and I could NEVER be as great as Dickinson or Frost or Poe.

I do better at funny and silly and childish ^^;
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YaVaho155 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I see, my bad for understanding ^^
my apologies.

And off to F@#!ing code again <.<
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MorganZephyr999 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
why do you write in verse
every time you converse
within this tiny literature piece
and shall continue until til heavens mince meat
oh god its horrible trying to rhyme
and now you've dragged me into it this time
But do the casualocke, ol cocoaferret
now is the time to try one alone
i dont exactly know what that last one means
boy, i need a nice rest at home
so a soul silver one i heard
can i name at least a bird
if its a hoothoot that crows
name it Tick, which shows
that you really have lots to learn
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ShadeofShinon Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This was such a lovely introduction! You're really good at writing poems, they're so nice to read and they tell the reader so much in just a couple of verses. Oh, and those little pictures you draw in each part are so lovely, this run could as well be and illustrated poem book. <3
I'll be following this! :>
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cocoaferret Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! While I'm really only capable of writing silly poems, I'm glad it's turned out well!

Haha, It's such an easy little project, I hope I'll carry on with it! XD
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ShadeofShinon Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem at all!
I hope so, too! It'd be really nice to see how this continues. :>
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AoiSora19S Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
._. rhyming. rhyming everywhere
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kodachichan Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2011
Wow, I'm so impressed. I'm completely useless at rhyming myself, so it's really cool to see someone who isn't. You should be proud of this ability!
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cocoaferret Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011  Student General Artist
Ahhhh, thank you!

I may not be a master of it, but I do love funny, quirky poems! XD
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